low down

rants, grunts, raves, waves...anything! what have you. my thoughts, ideas, emotions. everything i write here would basically be words i have in my head. might be sensical to some, worthless to none. nonetheless, just read on!

13.11.04

downtrodden

the path ahead long and unending
listless, the heart and mind in a tussle
if you're not here, where am i going?
cannot move, not even a single muscle
it's hard daring life alone
no one to share the cudgels with
shivers creep up to the bone
the sadness won't take heed
i have been working this and alot of stuff in my head. call me hopeless but actually that has been the mood lately. can you finish this poem with me? at this point i need all the support i can get. even in this simple endeavor. maybe if we share our burden and let it out, it can ease the pain.

3 Comments:

  • At November 15, 2004 at 3:01 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    hey man.. lotsa things happening to ya i gues. evry1s got their own thing goin on, their own shit to handle. but sumthin good will come out of it. it may take weeks, months, years for us to get over sum stuff but wat matters is that even tho not evry1 can undrstand wat we'r goin thru we stil have ppl around us to back us up. cant taste life's sweetness without the sour.

    p.s. ngayon ko lng nafigure out how to post this way. blah. peace.

    Toni

     
  • At November 18, 2004 at 4:25 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    come with me I am heading no where
    but I won't be going down

     
  • At November 22, 2004 at 8:28 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    ...psst!
    hihihi
    hulaan mo ko weeehehehe
    ...peek-a-BOO

     

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